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Writing申请素材

Notes for a later application. Not a submitted essay, and not a place where missing scores get filled in.给以后申请用的笔记。不是已经提交的文书,也不是把缺失的分数补上去的地方。

Working notes for a future application. This is not a submitted essay, and it is not a list of claims beyond the record. The personal statement on the Common App is 650 words. The useful story is not “what I won.” It is how he asks a question, and how he rebuilds a method after something fails.给未来申请季用的工作笔记。这不是一篇已经提交的文书,也不会超出档案去加码。Common App 主文书是 650 字。有用的故事不是“我赢得了什么”,而是他怎样提问,以及一件事失败之后,他怎样重建方法。

Activity list, working draft活动列表草稿
##Activity活动Organization组织When时间Role角色Description描述
1USAPhO SemifinalistUSAPhO 半决赛AAPT U.S. Physics TeamAAPT U.S. Physics Team2025–20262025–2026Contestant参赛者Sat the 4-hour closed-book semifinal on April 10, after qualifying from the national F=ma contest. About 400 students were invited.4 月 10 日参加 4 小时闭卷半决赛。此前从全国 F=ma 晋级,约 400 人受邀。
2USA-NA-AIO Round 2USA-NA-AIO 第二轮USA-NA-AIOUSA-NA-AIO2026-042026-04Contestant参赛者Traveled to Boston and Cambridge for the on-site round at MIT and Harvard: three faculty talks and two contest blocks.前往波士顿与剑桥,在 MIT 和哈佛完成现场赛程,包括三场教授讲座和两段竞赛。
3AP Chinese Language and CultureAP 中文语言与文化College BoardCollege Board20262026Candidate应考Sat the exam on May 8 at Los Altos High School. The July report was 5/5.5 月 8 日在 Los Altos High School 应考。7 月成绩为 5/5。
4Robot club, programming lead机器人社团编程组组长Sierra Vista Middle SchoolSierra Vista Middle School2023–20252023–2025Lead组长Obstacle avoidance, arm control, and path planning. The team placed second in the regional maze challenge.负责避障算法、机械臂控制与路径规划。团队在区域赛迷宫挑战中获得第二名。
5Air-quality forecasting system空气质量预测系统Personal project个人项目20202020Independent独立开发Python read public air-quality data, estimated the next day’s PM2.5, and sent an email alert.用 Python 读取公开空气质量数据,估计次日 PM2.5,并发送邮件提醒。
6Website maintenance网站维护New Hope World Alliance FoundationNew Hope World Alliance Foundation2025-102025-10Volunteer志愿者Four hours updating the site, in support of education, nutrition, medical care, and clean-water work for children in Africa.4 小时网站维护与内容更新,支持面向非洲儿童的教育、营养、医疗与清洁水源项目。
7Piano — CM Level 8钢琴 — CM Level 8Certificate of MeritCertificate of Merit2024–20262024–2026Pianist演奏者Passed CM Level 8. After CM Level 10 was not passed, he reviewed how he had managed the time and kept going.通过 CM Level 8。CM Level 10 未通过之后,复盘了时间管理并继续考下去。
8AI and mental health人工智能与心理健康Self-directed个人研究2025 – present2025 至今Independent独立研究者Teaching himself NLP and sentiment analysis, toward a privacy-preserving, non-intrusive check-in for teenagers. Early stage.自学自然语言处理与情感分析,探索隐私保护的、非侵入式的青少年情绪监测。早期阶段。
9Sustainable technology可持续技术Self-directed个人研究2025 – present2025 至今Independent独立研究者A personal carbon tracker, and study of energy-optimization and lower-cost algorithms.个人碳排放追踪,以及能源优化算法与更可持续的算法设计。

Three arcs for the personal statement主文书的三个故事弧

01

The question that started it提问的起点

A smog day, and “Why is the sky gray sometimes?” Problem-seeing, then a piece of technology that actually reached his family.一个雾霾天,和那句“为什么天空有时候是灰色的?”。先看见问题,再让技术真正落到家人身上。

02

Rebuilding a method after a failure失败之后重建方法

CM Level 10, and the time-management lesson: plan earlier, spread the pressure, keep the daily practice. The same night became the FFT project.CM Level 10,以及时间管理上的教训:提前规划,分散压力,持续练习。当天晚上,这件事变成了 FFT 项目。

03

Two kinds of thinking, in the same person两种思维撞在同一个人身上

Physics derives from first principles. A lot of AI work iterates and tries. He thinks the real innovation is the combination.物理从第一性原理推导。很多人工智能工作靠迭代和试错。他认为真正的创新是两者合在一起。

What I have actually been doing, for as long as I can remember, is asking why, and then finding a way.我从小到大真正在做的一件事,是追问为什么,然后想办法。

The direction he wants to keep walking is AI for Science, sustainable technology, and education technology — technology that enhances people rather than replacing them.他选择继续走的方向,是 AI for Science、可持续技术与教育科技——让技术增强人类,而不是取代人类。

UC insight questionsUC 个人洞察问题

UC Personal Insight Questions: choose 4 prompts, 350 words each. The lines above are directions, not drafts.UC Personal Insight Questions:选 4 题,每题 350 字。上面是方向,不是已经写好的答案。

  • An experience that changed how you see the world一次改变你看待世界的经历

    The smog, and the air-quality system.雾霾,和空气质量系统。

  • A challenge or a failure, and what you did with it一次挑战或失败,以及你如何应对

    CM Level 10.CM Level 10。

  • Something you want to change你想改变的一件事

    A tool for teenage mental health, and sustainable technology.青少年心理健康工具,以及可持续技术。

  • A word or an idea that defines you一个定义你的词或理念

    “Enhance, not replace.” Solve the real problem with the most fitting technology.“增强,而不是取代。”用最合适的技术解决真实问题。